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Battles in the Kingdom of Fear:
Hunter S. Thompson at Home in the West

By Edgar H. Thompson

My notes on the outline for this paper look like Eminem’s rhyme pad, notes that appear chaotic but have a common thread at the center, in this case Hunter S. Thompson, on stage, at the center of this memoir, a loose name for a very complex book with a complex structure. It doesn’t look like you are going where you are going but when you get there, you have experienced the trip of Thompson’s life to some degree, and it is an amazing ride, not only in terms of the content but the stylistic structure of the book. This book is a tribute to Thompson’s development from his original success with Hell’s Angels to this book, his next to last, and in a way his most significant in my opinion. It is put together in broad metaphors and themes in a sequence that doesn’t necessarily make sense if you look at them originally, but do make sense after the fact. Through the energy of the writing, the narrative drive moves all over the place--up/down, real/imagined--but the story or structure moves forward over time, and a story gets told.

At the center of the story is Hunter himself, starting with a childhood prank when he was 8 or nine years old that changed his life. He and some neighborhood boys managed to pull a federal post office box into the road in front of a hated school bus driver. When the F.B.I. visits Thompson’s home and tries to intimidate him into a confession based on witnesses the F.B.I. agents claim to have, Thompson does something that changes his life forever. Instead of accepting the word and authority of the F.B.I. without question, he asks “What witnesses?” It turns out, there aren’t any, and Thompson learns something about those supposedly in power [4-6]: Don’t assume anything; question those who portray themselves as having authority. He does this the rest of his life. Although he always questioned and lived on the edge [in a later book he says he has been clinically dead 16 times], he never tried to impose his life on anyone else. As he put it:

My life has been the polar opposite of safe, but I am proud of it and so is my son, and that is good enough for me. I would do it all over again without changing the beat, although I have never recommended it to others. That would be cruel and irresponsible and wrong, I think, and I am none of those things. [xxii]

Even though he never recommends his life to others, he manages to put his readers vicariously into his life, into the moment of what was happening to him. He does this stylistically through his storytelling, which includes vivid description, sharp juxtaposition of images, and realistic language. Consider his trip to Cuba to a film festival. Thompson is sitting in the airport, and sees a guy approaching him who turns out to be a rich cop on the lam. This is the kind of person you don’t want to be with you on your way to Cuba. He doesn’t actually say this, but he implies it by what follows. He shares his work on Cuba over the years, including a news article that lists the severe penalties for criminal and political opponents in Cuba. He is nervous on the plane from Cancun to Havana, and he tries to ask how much money he is supposed to pay for food, and since he doesn’t speak Spanish that well, he is nervous because the man he is asking help from says “I want no United States dollars” implying that to accept such money publicly is a no-no [227]. He is going to Cuba to screen the movie version of Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, and he remembers assuring the ambassador that he is not a dope fiend. Then as he is shaving in the bathroom before the plane lands, he finds some hashish in his toilet kit, and he is really beginning to get worried about getting into Cuba. When he lands, the passengers are herded off the plane and separated, almost as a way to disengage them from security. He would have run, but there was no place to run to, so he does what has learned to do when you are guilty, “move toward the police, never run away from them” [230].  Though afraid, he finally is admitted to the country. Once there, he learns that you don’t have to go far to learn a lot about what is happening in Cuba.

You can learn a lot of things just by hanging out in front of the Hotel Nacional in Havana. There is a heavy mix of criminals and foreigners and beautiful women with special agendas. Nobody is exactly what they seem to be in Havana, and that is especially true at the Hotel Nacional, which enjoys a worldwide reputation for the finest hospitality in Cuba.

The Malecon is the long, wide boulevard that runs along the waterfront in Havana. The harbor is badly polluted, but a mile offshore, where the Gulf Stream runs, the water is pure and fast. No islands dot the horizon. There is nothing between here and key West except ninety miles of deep water and six million sharks. Some people go out there for fun, but not many. The Gulf of Mexico at night is strictly for business—commercial freighters, commercial fisherman, floating wreckage, and the occasion human skeleton.

The Malecon is different. There is life along the boulevard, strolling lovers and pedicabs and knots of police-affiliated hoodlums gathered here and there under streetlights, hooting at cars and tossing fish heads to crocodiles, which can surface like lightning and jump five feet straight up in the air when they think they see fresh meat. A croc in a fit of temper can swallow a small boy and two six-packs of beer in one gulp. [233]

By the end of this section, he has described interactions with people and more about what is happening in Cuba, with commentary that gives us a perspective that most of us do not have access to. [Side Note: His brief time in Vietnam right before the fall, though only about five pages long captures the same kinds of images I recorded in two poems of my own “Contraries” and “American Pie” written in the same location about three years before Thompson was there. The same thing happens in his description of the war in Granada.]

Variation in print--font, format, and the addition of pictures--adds a touch of grounded reality and credence to the evolving story, a sense of documented reality from many sources. For instance, when Thompson runs for sheriff in Aspen, he so threatens the historical, traditional power base in Aspen, Colorado, that Thompson is unfairly accused of all kinds of things. He is eventually exonerated. This happens more than once to Thompson, and in each of the three witness sections of this book, he interposes his own narrative with actual news stories written by him and others, letters, pictures, and iconic images all interspersed and linked together to tell each story. This keeps the pace, tone, and voice in variance, which provides a underlying sense of life to the actual written words on the surface.

In the case of Thompson’s run for the Aspen sheriff’s office, the story starts with Thompson the Freak Power candidate for sheriff, having his life threatened, and his home becomes an armed compound. Then he goes back to his time at the 1968 Chicago convention, his observations as a journalist, his being involved in the middle of violence, his understanding of the sinister nature of the so-called traditional power base, and his and others’ principled reactions to this kind of politics. The story then returns to Aspen 1970. The national press is there because Thompson wrote about his concept of “Freak Power” in an article in Rolling Stone, so this political notion of a new left-wing political movement garners attention. Ultimately, he didn’t win because the Rolling Stone article shared his strategy for winning, which gave his opponents the information they needed to prevail. Back and forth, stories and pictures, but when done, readers have a real sense of involvement. This approach, which is repeated often throughout the book, gives us a sense that life is a pastiche that only makes sense when looking back on it reflectively.

A challenge for the reader, and the critical reviewer, is to determine how and where what Thompson is writing is real or imaginary, and to what degree this makes a difference anyway. For instance, in the section It Never Got Weird Enough, he spent the night with Judge Clarence Thomas in the middle of Nevada after each in different cars run into a herd of sheep in the middle of the night. The Judge and his women friends ride with Hunter to the next town. This narrative is written as though it really happened, though whether it did or didn’t is irrelevant. What is important is how this approach so creatively reveals Thompson’s opinion of Judge Thomas and Thomas’s views on pornography and life. This is really a magical mystery tour, and Thompson sucks us into it. Another example is when Xania, a dream life girl, comes to join him in his pool early in the morning. Is she real or a dream, or does it really make any difference? Fiction and non-fiction combined with drug dreams. It all gets hard and difficult before it gets better, but it is cyclical.

Another example of Thompson’s vibrant style in this book is when he meets the woman who will become his last wife. Love conquers all. It takes a woman with intellect and insight to see through to the kind of person Thompson really is, as opposed to the persona he portrays in his writing. He meets Anita as she is being attacked by dogs in Venice, California. She goes away with him, and she agrees to become his assistant, has a nervous breakdown, but they connect. Why? She understands him. Consider the following section after Thompson crashes his Cadillac in Big Sur:

We shot past a darkened house and past a parked Jeep, then crashed into a waterfall high above the sea. I got out of the car and sat down on a rock, then lit up the marijuana pipe. “Well,” I said to Anita, “this is it. We must have taken a wrong turn.”
She laughed and sucked on some moss. Then she sat down across form me on a log. “You’re funny,” she said. “you’re very strange—and you don’t know why, do you?”
“No,” I said, “I’m stupid.”
“It’s because you have the soul of a teenage girl in the body of an elderly dope fiend,” she whispered. “That is why you have problems.” She patted me on the knee. “Yes. That is why people giggle with fear every time you come into a room. That is why you rescued me from those dogs in Venice.” [350-351]

Notice, even though this section reveals a lot about their relationship in an intimate way, it doesn’t get into really detailed personal information. Thompson is always on task, on the point as a writer, and by his own definition “the most accurate journalist you’ll ever read” [xvi]. He is open, but he doesn't reveal really personal confidences or experiences. For instance, he mentions his son many times in the book and is clearly proud of him, but he absolutely doesn't talk about his son's life in any personal way.

Thompson captures the chaos of life in his words. His life seems extreme, but in fact all lives are extreme. We just assume they aren't. It is hard to define the genre of this book, much as it is hard to categorize Edward Abbey's Desert Solitaire. The west in The Kingdom of Fear is not like the west of Abbey’s desert. Still, Owl Creek near Aspen, is an unusual place, a place where not only "good" people but freaks immigrate to.

This is the point at which I arrived last September, a month after my own bypass surgery. I had not concluded the paper. Hunter S. Thompson actually concluded it himself with his suicide in February of this year. The March 29 issue of Rolling Stone, which featured several published remembrances from family and friends over the years, tied together a lot of loose ends.

Gonzo journalism was almost an accident in how it developed. Thompson had taken an assignment to write a story for Scanlan’s Monthly about the Kentucky Derby, and he just couldn’t get any writing to come. He finally sent the editors some notes from his notebook, and he received rave reviews for his efforts. As Gilmore describes it:

Thompson has hit on not just a style but a voice. He was inside the story—documenting his own reactions, state of mind, following loopy digressions until they landed in unanticipated pools of revelation—but he was also, on another level, outside the scenes he wrote about: that is, he was a misfit, chronicling systems of accepted values that really had no value at all. (44)

Thompson went on to formalize his approach in the following way: ”The eye & the mind would be functioning as a camera. The writing would be selective & interpretative—but once the image was written the words would be final” (44). This is what he did in his writing for the rest of his career, particularly in The Kingdom of Fear. As his son, Juan, observed, “He believed in the darkest as well as they highest potential of the human heart and spoke in what at first appeared to be hyperbole yet, on reflection, turned out to be a more accurate, essential depiction, even though he took liberties with actual facts” (72).

Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas was his masterpiece for many. As Gilmore says, “Thompson’s Fear and Loathing was about disillusionment—the feelings that gnawed at you after a dream that proved only a hallucination. It was also the terror of losing that illusion, and having no refuse.” (47). Though Thompson went on to write about politics with an insight not frequently found among political writers and to write long-form journalism and outlandish, imaginary stories that got at issues at the center of American life--e.g., his story about Judge Clarence Thomas and women of ill repute on a trip through the Great Basin in Nevada, etc., etc.—the experience of being at the edge changed. Gilmore says it better than I can: “In the end, there was probably little left for Thompson to say in written words. He’d already documented the abyss as had few other writers . . . . He had not more to say about it, and no more to say about himself” (47). With his physical health failing him, Thompson simply could not, and would not accept, as Brinkley put it, becoming the “spokesman for the “New Old’”(38). Thompson apparently came to understand that what he had observed about Ernest Hemingway’s suicide during a visit to Ketchum, Idaho years earlier was also true about him: Thompson said of Hemingway, “He was an old, sick and very troubled man, and contentment was not enough for him” (36).

Yet in the middle of all of this and an extreme life style, he was referred to by Johnny Deep (49) and Jack Nicholson (71) as a southern gentlemen, and virtually everyone who called him friend spoke of how kind he was to them and their families. His son said that it was a sense of community that his father gave to people: “He taught us, or maybe he reminded us, what it meant to be a community, about loyalty, about sticking together, about doing the right thing for each other” (72).

Is Hunter S. Thompson a western writer? The answer is no in the classic cowboy sense, but yes, in that he lived in the west, wrote a lot about contemporary life and his experiences there, and all of this writing gives us, his readers, an expanded sense of what life is like on the edge in the urban and rural west. He left us with a lot.

I personally prefer to remember Hunter S. Thompson not on a drug and/or alcohol induced high, but as a person, a writer, a chronicler of life. His description of one of his characters leaving Puerto Rico near the end of The Rum Diary is how I want to vicariously remember Thompson:

It was the last time I saw him and I remember it very clearly. He walked out on the pier and stood near a wooden lamppost, looking out at the sea. The only living thing in a dead Caribbean town—a tall figure in a rumpled Palm Beach suit, his only suit, now full of dirt and grass stains and bulgy pockets, standing alone on a pier at the end of the world and thinking his own thoughts. I waved again, although his back was to me, and gave two quick blasts on the horn as I sped out of town. (202)

To me, this is the image of a man looking towards the future, towards what could and might be, and will be [Pause] in the imagination of those of us who follow him into The Kingdom of Fear.

References Cited
Brinkley, Douglas. “Content Was Not Enough: Final Days at Owl Farm.” Rolling Stone. Issue 970 (March 24, 2005), 36-42.

Depp, Johnny. “A Pair of Deviant Bookends.” Rolling Stone. Issue 970 (March 24, 2005), 48-49.

Gilmore, Mikal. “The Last Outlaw.” Rolling Stone. Issue 970 (March 24, 2005), 44-47.

Nicholson, Jack. “A Very Fine American.” Rolling Stone. Issue 970 (March 24, 2005), 71.

Thompson, Hunter S. Kingdom of Fear: Loathsome Secrets of a Star-Crossed Child in the Final Days of the American Century. New York: Simon & Schuster, 2003.

Thompson, Hunter S. The Rum Diary. New York: Simon & Schuster, 1998.

Thompson, Juan. “My Father.” Rolling Stone. Issue 970 (March 24, 2005), 72.

 

Edgar H. Thompson
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